[토플 D-82] ChatGPT가 내주는 Writing 문제 풀어보기

 

 

 

 

 

드.디.어. 토플 공부란 것을 시작했구요.

지피티한테 라이팅 문제 몇 개 내달라고 시켜서 풀어보았읍니다.

 

 

 

예시문제 1 - Independent Writing

"Some people prefer to focus on one project at a time, while others like to handle multiple tasks at once.
Which do you prefer and why?"

 

내 답변

I prefer to handle multiple tasks at once. The biggest reason of it is that it is simply not possible to do only one thing at once. My brain is like a theme park, always full of ideas and goals. I do those things like juggling. Additionally, when you do many things from various field at once, you can get better result. For instance, if you paint and make a website in the same week, you will definitely get better designed website. That's why dealing with multiple tasks at once is so helpful for me.

 

첨삭

1. 내용/논리 (Content & Development): 4.5점

• 주제에 딱 맞게 의견을 명확히 표현했고
• 개인적인 설명 + 구체적인 예시도 좋았어 (theme park + 예술/디자인 콤보!)
• 결론도 간결하게 잘 마무리함

2. 조직력 (Organization): 4점

• 전반적으로 자연스럽고 매끄러운 흐름
• 단, 문장 간 전환 표현이 조금 더 풍부했으면 더 고급스러웠을 듯

3. 언어 사용 (Language Use): 4점

• 어휘는 자연스럽고 창의적
• 문법상 소소한 표현 오류 (like "from various field" 등) 있었지만 의미 전달엔 영향 거의 없음
• 조금 더 복잡한 문장 구조나 접속어를 섞으면 만점 가능

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🔥 최종 점수 예측: 4.0~4.5 / 5.0

💬 만점 대비 약 85~90점 수준!

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💡 추가 팁
이 점수는 실전 기준으로 매우 좋은 점수야.
100점 목표라면 Writing에서 25점 이상 노려야 하니까
지금처럼 조금만 다듬으면 실제 시험에서도 충분히 목표 가능!

너는 내용 발상력 + 표현 감각 + 유창성이 다 살아있어서,
조금만 "시험 스타일로 세련되게" 다듬는 훈련만 하면 진짜 고득점 가능해.

 

첨삭 답변

I prefer to handle multiple tasks at once.
The main reason is that it’s simply not possible for me to focus on just one thing at a time.
My brain is like a theme park—always full of ideas and goals.
I approach tasks like juggling, moving between them with energy.

Additionally, working on different things from various fields can lead to better results.
For example, if you paint and build a website in the same week, the website will likely have better design elements.

That’s why managing multiple tasks is not only more natural for me, but also more productive and creatively rewarding.

 

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예시문제 2 - Independent Writing

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to study alone than to study in a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

내 답변 (15분 소요)

In my opinion, it highly depends on the type of what you are trying to study.
The main reason of it is that 'study' has so much different meaning. You can study how to write in English, build a website, or even dance!
When you want to study academic things like English vocabulary or basic textbook of programming, I think you should study alone. Because when you have to put some new knowledge in your brain, the existence of other people could be a big distraction. If one of them lose attention, you will be the next one who turn your eyes from the boring books.
But academic or textbook way of study is not the only thing. There are plenty of thing to study practically. When you want to build a fancy website or learn how to dance, you definitely need other people's energy and their unique ideas. They will help you not only to make better result with their different lives and points of view, but also make you more productive with their own personalities and energies.
That's why I think you should choose proper one from two different ways of study depends on the type of it. You have to analyze what you are going to study first, before you start it alone or together.

 

 

첨삭

🧠 평가 기준별 분석

✅ 1. 내용 / 논리 (Content & Development) → 4.0점

• “둘 중 하나가 더 낫다” 식의 단정 대신
  “상황에 따라 다르다”는 균형감 있는 주장을 잘 펼침
• 예시도 다양하고 현실감 있음 (영어, 프로그래밍, 웹사이트, 댄스)
• 다만, 결론 문장이 살짝 반복적이고 어색한 구조가 있어 (→ 마지막 줄 수정 여지 있음)

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✅ 2. 조직력 / 구조 (Organization) → 3.5점

• 전체 흐름은 자연스러워.
• 단락 구분 없이 한 덩어리로 쓰인 점은 감점 요인 (TOEFL은 단락 구분 매우 중요!)
• 서론이 짧고, 결론은 조금 장황함 → 중간 본론은 강한데 양쪽이 조금 약함

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✅ 3. 언어 사용 (Language Use) → 3.5점

• 표현력 자체는 좋아! 단, 문법상 약간의 오류 존재:
  • “The main reason of it → The main reason is that”
  • “There are plenty of thing → plenty of things”
  • “Depends on the type → depending on the type”
• 접속사, 문장 연결, 대명사 사용 등이 조금 어색한 부분 있음
  → 전체적 의미 전달에는 큰 지장 없지만, **유창성(Fluency)**에서 약간 감점

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✅ 총점 예측: 3.5 ~ 4.0 / 5.0

💬 실제 TOEFL 점수로 치면 약 22~24점 수준
지금도 충분히 훌륭하지만, 문단 구조 + 문법만 조금 다듬으면 25+ 가능!

 

💡 “영어스럽게 적기” 팁 3가지

1. 짧은 문장 → 길게 말고, 연결로 유창하게
   • 예:
     ❌ “There are plenty of thing to study practically.”
     ✅ “There are plenty of practical things to study.”
2. 사람/에너지/관점 이런 단어는 잘 쓰되, 문법만 체크
   • 너는 아이디어 자체가 창의적이라,
     영어로 옮길 때 문법적인 틀만 잡아주면 금방 좋아져
3. 반복되는 표현은 다르게 바꿔보기
   • 예: “study”를 계속 반복하기보다는
     → “learn”, “absorb knowledge”, “work on a skill” 등으로 변주해주면 더 자연스러워!

 

첨삭 버전

In my opinion, it highly depends on what you are trying to study.
The word "study" can mean many different things—you can study how to write in English, build a website, or even dance.

When it comes to academic subjects like English vocabulary or programming basics, I think it’s better to study alone. When you need to absorb new knowledge, the presence of others can become a distraction. If one person loses focus, others may follow and drift away from the task.

However, studying is not always academic. There are many practical things to learn, like designing a website or learning to dance. In these cases, studying with others is more effective. Their unique ideas and perspectives can lead to better results, and their energy can keep you motivated.

That’s why I believe the best study method depends on the subject. Before starting, analyze what you want to learn, and then choose whether to go solo or work with others.